Jenna Frenzel

Ok guys, how's this: A warm summer’s day, a harsh winter’s night; these things, like all other objects we can see, touch, make up the world. Along with these items ...

Thank you all for these comments! I hope to revise this, when I find the time....

Funny I read it so long ago that I barely rmembered the name of the book. :? Does it sound too much like it?

7/10 Kind o' creepy o.0

A warm summer’s day, a harsh winter night; these things, like all other things we can see, touch, make up the world. Along with these things come all things in ...

I liked it a lot--even enough to say that I loved it. Your voice sounded almost identical to JK's, and I think that your ending is more in her style ...

'til, that's me. My mom's till though. :roll:

Thanks, I'll incorporate that.

For future refrence, for some reason the site isn't cooperating right now and it broke the formatting about halfway through. I can't get it to fix, but for now, enjoy ...

I like it, though I found it a bit of a cliche. I only found a few problems: Her walls were so covered in posters and magazine clippings, that the ...

It was the program I edtied it in. I couldn't figure out how to make a solid dash in it. :oops:

I agree with the above comments: I like your thoughts, but the punctuation and grammar made it difficult to read. Try giving it a good read-through.

I really like the Alice one--it's very bold and the eye color makes the viewer's attention come to it. I don't get the first one though, and the text seems ...

This was something I wrote two years ago for a science benchmark. I don't know where I got the idea for it. -------------------------------------------- It felt good to watch over the ...

All in all I thought this was very very good: it caught my attention at once, with the panic surrounding the fire. There was, however, some punctuation problems and the ...